Friday, December 4, 2009

Adam Vaniska and Chelsie Maddox - Predraft Writing

4 comments:

  1. Good video on predraft writing you really explained what to do. i really like how the video was well organized and accurate.

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  2. It was great seeing you both for the first time. I would just suggest using more voice in your subject matter. What is your experience with predrafting. I like your visuals with clustering and your comment about knowing this from 4th or 5th grade. Reminded me of the show Are You Smarter than a Fifth Grader. I also liked your summary at the end. I also liked how you plugged the Dobrin book at the end of the video.

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  3. Great job guys! I think that you two did a nice summary about predraft writing, nice to see the faces of some of my group members. Try to put a more catchy title. The video was very informative.

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  4. You both did a great job! The video was helpful and had great information on predrafting. I also remember doing the clustering back in 5th grade.

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